rate_review Reviews

I hope you continue with this I really like how you've started out.

I really loved this! The only criticism I have is that it should have been split up a bit more, even if it was just a oneshot thing. It was really too long for one chapter, maybe two or three might have been better? I hope you continue, this whole Spike-with-a-soul and Xander-hyena is pretty interesting, and I'd love to see if it's ever 'cured', or if they're doomed to stay like that forever, like Dru predicted (... did she predict that? Haha, bad memory...)

Great story!

that was a good read! there was massive OOC though. Spike uses 'whelp' and 'luv' waaaaaaaaay too much and Angelus just seems like the only thing on his mind is raping everyone...
i also dont get what the last lines mean. does Xander drink blood now too?
anyway, i know it sounds like im being super critical, but i really did like the fic ^^

AH! I loved it! It was way too short! Tell me you will be writing more!?

I love this story!!! Please let there be a sequel. Great work and great writing.