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for A Better Kind of Hell

by Kimmy

schedule November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was. Good. lol. Sweet and sad and kinda hot all at the same time. lol.
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was terribly, terribly beautiful. I'm crying with the force of emotion your story put in me. It was beautiful.
person Ryoko21
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome start to a story, can't wait to see what happens next and... well... what happened before, too. I really like the way you use short, descriptive lines instead of long, wordy ones. I always have problems with that. Anyway, good start, keep it up, and I can't wait to see more.