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by MicheleMarsters

person Nathalie
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That's some good story! Too bad all stories around here seems to be unfinished :(
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Can't wait for the next update. Can you email me when the next chapter is up?
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More more more!!!! pretty please with a cherry on top!!
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
REal good writing. Angel as a football star with a wild brother is reather cliched but you're a good writer, and I want to read more.
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
?Spike?? A hard knocking came at his bedroom door and his hand shot up, out of his boxers, almost smacking him in the chin. It was Buffy.

Loved this line. :)