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for Wanting B, Taking C, Having Both

by MTL

person No one
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well leaving it there is a big tease. Just when Faith realizes she has Buffy right where she wants her, you end it. Write more soon!
person LL72
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed this story. However, the switching perspective can be a bit of a pain, especially when they're just repeating the same dialogue. If you're doing future installments (and I hope you do) perhaps it would work better if you had one POV and stuck to it
person Lorenzo Soledad
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*wide grin* Is there a second chap coming on? Hell I do hope so.