rate_review Reviews

I like this story, are you going to write any more? Also, if you don't mind taking a couple of requests here:
1)Terminator: Sarah Connor Chronicles;Cameron/Sarah; it doesn't matter who's dominate but I prefer Cameron dominating Sarah.
2)Vampire Diaries; Any pairings is fine but I would like to see Elena/Katherine or Katherine/Bonnie.
3)Once Upon a Time; The Evil Witch/Emma (I don't care who's dominate)
4)Legend of the Seeker;Cara/Kahlan(I don't care for who's dominate)
5)Nikita(2011 TV);Alex/Nikita (I'd like Alex dominating Nikita)
6)Buffy;Cordelia/Buffy (I'd like to see a particular story where Cordelia dominating Buffy and threaten to tell the location of Buffy's house to the vampires if she doesn't do what Cordelia asks which this might occurs season 1)
I read all the stories you've written and they're all good to me. Thanks for these stories and keep up good work!

I like this story. But then I have a thing for reading about female anal sex in fanfiction. Some people seem not to like how you go over the same act from two view points but I do. Are you going to do a fourth part? The end of "Keeping Faith" seemed to imply that Cordelia was going to do everything in her power to keep her place in Faith's life and add Buffy to it. I would certainly like to see Cordy giving herself to Faith again and the idea of her wearing a butt-pulg for Faith would be fun to see happen.

Moar please!

thank you for this story .o)
i would like to see buffy more submisive in the next chapters .o)

i loved this story can't wait for more!

I really like the story but like others have said, repeating ALL the action from the second POV just gets tiresome. There are parts of the story where it can be very interesting to see what's going on in both minds, but mostly you're just repeating the dialogue with no great insights.
I'd love to see the story continue - F, B and C what's not to like - but please, one POV only or switch POV's at an appropriate point, but only go back over the same area if there's something to add.

Lots of detail lots of dialog and Buffy/Cordy/Faith sex. I was dreading the POV repetition of wordiness but it didn't crimp the flow after
I got use to it. Why did Faith leave what with the pants down and all? She could have said something provocative and then split,the other
shoe to drop later but as it is there is no reason to continue and I want it to continue.

I really like this story and hope you update soon because I really want to see Faith's reaction to Buffy and Cordelia being together.

Okay, you need to add the next chapter. This was awesome.

While I don't mind the doubled-up dialog and such because it explores two different POVs, you always end up with it bizarrely formatted in one of the two POVs (both in the F/C chapter and the F/C/B one). If you fixed it, that'd be greatly appreciated.

By the by, when is Dawn gonna get used like a slut in your other fic?