rate_review Reviews

Quite possibly one of my favorite Buffy adult fanfics ever. Chapter five being the best chapter IMO. Hope to see more from you or even a sequel.

I will never get tired of the chapter you wrote for me :-)

AW, I was waiting for Buffy's Von Trapp kids. But hee, Kennedy being trained by Willow and Tara. yah, Tara is alive! I'm glad you didn't have any moralizing, or have a big scene with Buffy and family trying to convince the gang about their lifestyle. I like the little bits, like a small mention about convincing Xander. Hee, and yeah, Anya would be in the financial end of it.

I confused this Eve with Eve in Angel season 5. And thanks for keeping Spike alive, and everyone alive!

Admittedly, I didn't care that much for the first 4 chapters because I found the plot weird and often illogical. And even though it had some nice sex scenes, those often felt kinda random.

I'm still glad I kept an eye on this story because it got a whole lot better with Dawn involved, and I especially loved chapter 6 with Joyce loving and dominating her beautiful daughters.

Chapter 7 was simply inspiring. Loved the whole cathouse idea, and how you included the female scoobies in it.
Also really liked the way the chapter started by introducing the reader to the many changes in the Summers' home by letting them experience it from Chloe's POV.

Nicely done.

I did indeed love the wheelchair scene, Thank you so much :-)

More please, but I'd like a clear description of the sisters, because I sorta picture them as abnormally top-heavy with beach ball boobs. It's the only weak spot in the whole piece.

I'd love to see the Scoobies, especially Xander since he's the closest male second to Giles to all 3 women IMO. I don't really go for Spike unless he's evil and not an Angel clone.

10/10 for this chapter

ok, I can figure out what Joyce's idea on keeping the girls off the street is ;)

ok, I've found this fic weird but a good read. But chap. 4 was brilliant. I love Buffy telling the truth (nice that her wish for Xander wasn't weird), loved: "MEN!" Buffy exclaimed, shaking her head in disbelief "Or maybe that should be 'males' as you're not human. You're really twisted master, you know that?"
"Hey, YOU'RE the one who wants to be an alien sex slave for a year" he retorted.
He had a point. Not to mention all those cunthuggers being exported to horny females all over the galaxy.
"Women" Buffy conceded "We're just as twisted!"

loved the little things like insect aliens only live for 30 days. And even though it seems weird an intergalactic pimp would take the time to tell her the whole story, at least it didn't take way too much time. I never read the Gatherin Storm, though I do love the litte cameos; not surprised by Dana Scully but Wonder Woman? then two of those chosen ones from Charmer? And the MLF from Desperate HOusewives? Fucking fantastic. great stuff. Though I would like some Spike lovin'. Or see what Angel has to say about Buffy's job (though I imagine the two would be at it like rabbits in less then 2 seconds.)

Oh, hee, brilliant: The competition was so intense that a severed head bounced onto the stage...
"For crying out loud!" Buffy thought, kicking it back into the melee.

So Buffy is killing vamps and demons? Cool.

I like the bit about how crappy the football team was. And Buffy not letting Dawn or her drink beer, hee.

I forgot, I loved the last chap where Buffy yells that the alien owes here a million dollars.

I sort of didn't care much about the message (Thanks Shelia Rosenberg) but it fits in the story.

Please let them fuck the Scoobies next,

I like that the scary torture is over, and they like what they do Sexy sister love too.