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for Time Spin

by inked4chaos

person animism
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the last 2 updates, a lot is happening. Maybe it is time for Buffy to bring her family home..........
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man its geting good! keep it up your doing great!
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am loving this story! are you going to send them back to the future?
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great work.
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ya thay have kids now! but i think it suck that buffy gave away her locket. but other then that i love this story!
person animism
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great update. I am wondering why Raya, has so much trouble with Ryan being a tiger when in fact her own Mother is a tiger??? I am really enjoying the way you write about both time lines and are able to keep us caught up on the happenings with all of your characters.
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you got it in one. every new parent has moments like that and i find it funny that you spin in the dildo like that. but im wondering when thing really go down hill. ya did a great job keep it up!
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great job keep it up!
person guy
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good progress. Please update soon.
person animism
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, and I think it would be nice if Remy, was Ryan's brother. Allows Ryan and Skye to still be kids themselves and yet mature enough to do the right thing by taking care of her brother. Where is the rest of their pack I wonder?