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by inked4chaos

person animism
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very intense chapter, I can't wait for more.
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i don't want her to die, but please keep up the great work.
person guy
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope Lonnie gets better soon. I can't wait to see everyone's reactions to Buffy being home with a wife and two children and where she's been the entire time. Please update again soon!
person guy
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Something else I was wondering about was the language barrier. From what I read, only Buffy learned how to speak Lonnie's language, which I don't think you mentioned what it was that she spoke. Lonnie's bound to feel scared and confused when she finally coherent. She wouldn't even be able to talk to anyone. Are you going to make Buffy be translator? And I'm also wondering about the shocked reactions that Buffy's family might give when they find out that Buffy actually learned another language. It should be funny.
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its great! please keep it up.
person guy
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I'm excited for Buffy to go home. Please give us more soon.
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now its really getting good!
person animism
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cliff hangers............very nice update.......need more.........
person guy
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... things are starting to get interesting. Please give us an update soon.
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great job on the update! keep it up and thanks for answering my question.