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by inked4chaos

schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what is it with you and almost killing off charaters? it makes for good drama but you can only do so much before it gets old. its a great story really, i like it alote.
person guy
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the new updates. Please give us more soon.
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. The concept is new and interesting and the charcters you have created to add to the regular cast are developed well. Can't wait for more and I promise to review more offer.
person guy
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you're on a roll! The more updates, the merrier. Please post more soon.
person animism
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful suprise to log on and see so many wonderful updates. You are awesome, the story is great, and I can't wait for more.
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK THAT WAS FUNNY! great job keep it up!
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Updates all over the place-I love it!
Like how you keep all the storylines going, Lonnie's confusion,
Skye's pain, and the suspense that is building is great.
Can't wait for more.
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that sucks about Skye And Ryan, and im kinda looking forward to what you have pland for next, great job keep it up.
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i know i just reciewed but you crank chapthers out like news papers, that fuckinf sucks what your doing to skye but thats drama, and whats up with sad Lonnie? any way great job.
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great update! When you gonna tell us what's up with
Ryan? I hope it's something Willow or someone else can fix.
Cause if not --poor Skye.
Can't wait for more.