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by inked4chaos

schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the singing thats just mean and funny to no end, i like it!
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More great updates!
Glad Asher is getting better-
the Bad Man is so gonna get his ass kicked
when Buffy or Lonnie or Raya or Willow gets
a hold of him! Can't wait. Liked the playfulness
with Ryan and Skye hope things turn out okay for
them. More updatey goodness soon please:)
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great great GREAT job!
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy heckmo this is geting good. out standing work.
person animism
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah for all of the updates. This story is fabulous. I have been wondering for some time how Asher and Andrew had the twins, thanks for clearing that up. I am still wondering how Raya's Mother can be a Cat and yet Raya a wolf, how did that come about, and why the big problem with Ryan and Remy being a mix, I mean all of the skin walkers are mixes in this story???
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! i really dont know whaat to say, its... awsome
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the mystery aspect of the story. But I'm curious how is Ryan sick?
Good Job.
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapters! Jaeger has to deal with so much at such a young age I worry about her.
And poor Asher I hope they find him in time and he is able to recover from his injuries.
Also glad that Raya is letting Ryan help with the search. Someone so needs to kick Evil's ass!
Can't wait for more.
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you just stip these chapters out don't you. i wish i had that kind of skill. your good!
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So how many bad guys we got? Riley-the and whole army group
who obvioiusly didn't learn ANYTHING from Sunnydale---and the Skinwalker
who's after Skye-are there more? Very good updates.
The last one very touching. Can't wait for more>