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by inked4chaos

schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well that was something! Demone fighting with Slayers, Skye. its all just great! keep it up please!!!
person animism
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another fabulous chapter. I am really enjoying this story!!!
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man i hope it all turns out ok. keep the updates flowing please and thanks.
person wilcat75
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey
really like this story like how everything is jelling together

you said that you where hveing trouble thinking of who should be the protector hear are my suggestions either lonnie or david

lonnie cos it would help her to feel more needed and like she fits in
david because hes the quiet one that no one seems to really no and could be keeping a secret

the only other thought that i had was if skye and ryan had a kid
bcos there blood mates and ryan is a hybrid and if she and skye had a kid it would be another hybrid but maybe cos its such a crossbreed it could change into any animal it wants and has a lot of power it doesnt have to be born yet ryan could be pregnant with it and kind of leach the power of it and it will also cure her

schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wouldn't it make sense to have the Protector be Ryan? That whole thing with her blood being deadly and all. Who else could it be? ::shurgs:: I just always thought Ryan was the protector.

If it were the slayers it would be the chosen. It can't be Skye, she is protected. Raya, I suppose could be the protector. But she has already vanished once in this story while protecting her loved ones.

Besides, this story has been more about Skye and Ryan. She has protected Remy for years, even when she has been sick. Definitly Ryan. Just don't kill her or Skye, I'd like Ryan to be happy for a little while. Even if there is no cure for her disease (which I think Willow could totally get out of her..hint hint, nudge nudge), she should be able to live out the last of her days with her mate in total bliss. Plus more sex. Lots more. Maybe even with some toys.

MORE MORE MORE!!!

~Jen~
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh thatas just to funny! thata a nice way to spice it. i whant to know whats up with the fainting, but i might know, But just in case im wrong, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
person animism
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
These last 2 chapters were too funny, I can't wait for more.
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
most fantastic update!
person animism
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you have done it once again. Thanks for a fabulous read!!!!!
person animism
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
These last chapters are intense and it is neat to see Jaeger's character coming to life. You have combined all of the different storylines beautifully and now have this huge, wonderful novel going. I love all of your speedy updates. Thanks