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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
bumer. i like it a lot. please please PLEASE, update soon.
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY HECKMO! is gooooooood! real goooood!
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it be kinda coolish if they went back after everything was done but had a way to come back at any time they wanted so that way they could have the best of both worlds. great job keep it up.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thats really got to suck! but its all good and i can't wait to read more.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really hope Buffy doesn't do that because she didn't even let Lonnie take more than one mate when they lived in Lonnie's village even though it's their custom. It's pretty pretty much like cheating and it isn't fair to do that to Lonnie despite everything. Also, Buffy isn't the type to do something like that. She's too loyal. Look at how devoted she was to Angel, even when they were doomed. If anything, maybe Buffy should just find a good friend in Sasha. I really don't think I that I could enjoy this story anymore if Buffy cheats.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I have to agree that I think Buffy cheating would be wrong, especially with the strain they are both in over their daughter. I was suprised that Lonnie isn't the protector, I think it would have given her a sense of purpose. It is cool that Ryan's blood can kill her father, but more importantly what can the gang do to save Ryan?
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew Ryan was going to be the protector. You put too many minute details into your stories that it was clear that Ryan was the protector... after I re-read the earlier chappies of course. As for Buffy cheating? Yeah, its not her way, she is loyal, however, Lonnie already thinks she cheated so whats the diff? Oh, and don't kill Jaeger, I'd be so sad I'd cry... literally!!!!
Keep 'em coming!!!
~Jen~
Keep 'em coming!!!
~Jen~
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was funny in a sad way. you did a great job keep it up please and thanks.
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new updates. I hope Buffy and Lonnie work things out. Please update again soon.
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very hot!!