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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is amazing, I love your story line and I can't wait for more!!!
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thats what flashbacks are for. and i really like this story keep up the good work!
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I do like to read about Raya and Faith, but I would prefer to read more on Buffy. You don't really need to mention Raya and Faith in almost every chapter. This is supposed to be Buffy's story and the jumping back and forth is distracting. Anyway, thanks for the updates.
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Some progress in moving forward. I'm glad that it wasn't Sharja who became Old Mother. Thank you for updating so quickly. I look forward to the next one.
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yea! Another chapter. Can I just say how happy I am that you update your story so quickly? Thank you for the new chapter. I'm excited for the next.
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your transition between Buffy and Lonza, and the present time, is smooth and complete. It is interesting to see where Faith and Raya are at with their brood and all of the other Scoobies too. I just logged on and read all 3 chapters what a treat.
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
as i said befor MORE, but this time i have more to say. i like the whole cavewomen idea and your writting style is wounderful at creating the images in your story.
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, Buffy made a good decision. I am wondering who turned the light on as Skye was leaving............need more. :)
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice! too bad there;s not enuf faith and raya drama.. but i understand this is a buffy fic..
great job anyways!
great job anyways!
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww............I wanted her to go home