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I'm trying not to, but I really don't like Lindsey in this fic. I kind of want to see him dead. His dad, too, but him as well. Or, at least let Spike drug and rape him without caring. Something to even up this situation.

I have to agree with Ryoko21's comments above.

I like the Lindsey/Spike thing--so don't get me wrong--but from the beginning their relationship felt strange and as this story has progressed I'm disliking Lindsey all the more for how he's treating Spike(who he's supposed to "love").

I've actually found myself liking the interactions between Oz and Spike more and more. I don't know what you have planned for the rest of this fic, but if it has anything to do with some Oz/Spike stuff, then you have my full support. (Though, if you keep it a Lindsey/Spike pairing then know that I will still enjoy it just as much--as long as Lindey realizes that he's been a jerk)

I wanna see Spike rip something to shreds. He's fun as the William-esque poofter that hangs all over Lindsey, but I want to see the British punk rock vampire get some bloody vengeance.

Wow! Not sure which way to jump on this story. On the one hand I feel so bad for Spike on the other hand Lindsey's so screwed over by his upbringing he doesn't even get that what he's doing is wrong and OMG is his dad the creepiest pervert or what?!

I just managed to find this story, and I was a little uncertain because I'm not big on Spike/Lindsey, but I really like the plot you have going. The idea of the chips being used to completely control the vampires is really interesting. I just have to wonder if Spike will ever have the chip and the drugs broken or removed. He's not really Spike right now, and I really liked the way you portrayed him in the beginning, as the caged Big Bad. I'd like to see how Lindsey would do with the real Spike, the rough-speaking trouble-maker, and see if Lindsey's love can last when Spike isn't a drugged-up sex doll. I also wonder if you might ever bring in Angel or Drusilla. Maybe it would be good to show Lindsey some of Spike's history and vampiric background.

Anyway, that's just my opinion. I like what you've done so far, and I can't wait to see what you do next.

Just finished with chapter 5. I wasn't so sure about Lindsey at first, but now I'm really starting to like his character more. Still can't say much for his father, though I might like him better if he had a broken bone or two, or a hundred. *hint, hint*

Don't know why I'm the only one reviewing this story. It seems like readers all over this site have been hit by a lazy bug or somethin'. Anyway...

I was happy that Lindsey finally saw Spike's tears. I know that he already thought that vampires had feelings, but that just proved it. I also like the fact that he sees Spike as more then just a sex toy (find it kind of cute that he's actually falling in love with him).

I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

All those chips and circuits in Spike need to fry, then Spike needs to kick Lindsey's father's ass.

Those are just my personal thoughts. Nice work. Please continue. :)

Interesting. I'm waiting to see where you take this story.

One thing that I found a little unnerving was when Lindsey's father was asking if he could use what is essentially (though I don't really like thinking of Spike in such a manner) his son's sex toy. Weird.

Anyway, good start. You don't see much of the Lindsey/Spike thing so I hope that you do continue with this (plus I REALLY want to see what you've got planned for this fic).