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for Things that go bump in the night

by inked4chaos

person animism
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh, great chapters, so intense. I need to know what happens..........
person animism
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very hot!!! Great story, fabulous characters...............outstanding.
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!! preggy faithy!!
i really do hope raya can protect them.
it would have been really funny to see faith actually sitting on raya's face!
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
extremely hot!!
damn...
love the dominant wolfy thing...
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
!! are they going to actually get married and live in a basement??!!
nice!!
person rachel99
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there. Just wanted to let you know that I like this story, but one little thing, I don't if it's possible or not but, I think there's too much sex and not enough building up to it. But I like it, it's definately different and worth every read. And the bebe, it should be twins!...or a girl. Or Faith should lose it in the final throwdown cuz by what you wrote, Raya is preggo too.
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my!! it;s getting interesting!!!!
poor spike horus should be a weee bit nicer to him..
person animism
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The way you write it will be awesome no matter what sex you choose for the child, although since Raya already has a son and a grandson a daughter might be nice. Amazing chapter Raya and Faith are perfect. Thanks for starting my morning off with this great chapter.
person animism
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! Very well written.
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!! thx for another great update..
can faith n raya get any hotter??
dying for the next chapter.. pls dont keep me waiting too long...