rate_review Reviews

Oh man! I hope Buffy means it and she doesn't go back! After being with Spike again going back to Angelus, or being with anyone else, would be beyond horrible. I was so surprised to see another update so soon--a great big thank you!

What a great surprise--yes, yes, and YES!!! I hate that she has to go back to Angelus and what is with Lindsay (I spelled it right this time)--what a creep! Thank you for updating so quickly and I can't wait to read more.

I'm fascinated by this story but don't find it "liable" --which doesn't mean that I'm not anxiously awaiting every update:-). But I am disturbed about why Buffy had to sleep with Linsey. I mean, she can't really enjoy sleeping with men she doesn't love so why sleep with another one even if he is there trying to help out? I admit to be wigged out by stories where Buffy is a prostitute but at least in this one she has been forced into it. So I'm disappointed that she made the choice to sleep with Linsey when she didn't need to. Can't wait for the next update--I want to see major revenge against Angelus! And it would be even better if Angelus is actually hurt as well as angry at Buffy's betrayal!

Sorry--I meant "likable" not "liable"

I really hope you continue this story. I'm anxious to read the next part.

Pretty good story, though I think you need a beta to look after the sentences flow. Chap. 7 was the best written. I did hope that Buffy and Spike could get away, and latter Angel would some how catch up with them. But chap. 7 wasn't horrible (in the rape sense). Can't wait for more.

the story seems okay. i dunno. i guess i have some issues with the story flow. it's a bit rushed and jarring with the continuity of how you tell it and the emotions that the characters are undergoing. i suppose it can get better but you definitely need a beta. sorry. it may seem harsh but the review is honest. hope it helps. good luck with your writing. cheers!

Like it So far. I wanna see Spuffy meet.

I like it!