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for Dawn’s Birthday Present

by topcat098

person whatweareafraidof
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story you just need more chapterss this story rocks
person hg556
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it up until the part with the hot dogs and the rest of the food, and then I had to stop reading. That wasn't even remotely sexy, it was just gross.
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fic needs another few chapters, thanks for the fic.
person derlich
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
where's the rest?