AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Freedom

by Heeroluva

person redshark
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Minute spelling error - but, overall lurve~ it.

Really liked how you were describing the whole dance club scene without specifically naming Xander doing 'x' and Spike doing 'y', definitely made for a more pleasing and smooth mental image.

Would not complain of seeing a round 2 of this fic with the club scene being something actually playing out and Xan being all 'omg'.
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sounded good to me. Any chance of a follow up to see Spike get his oats pretty please