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for I can See Clearly Now

by crash

person Douglas
schedule September 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this. Its so amazing how over these what, Fifteen YEARS so many wonderful writers took a thought and ran with it.
Everything from Wflgrrl's "EVEREST" to Michele's "Complement". BurntOrange's "The Passage of Time" to, well, Alot of either Faithful_chickie or Kristjan Brezovnik, and so, Sooo many others.
And to you.
It read very cleanly and clearly (minus the odd hiccup), and it was nice to see you throw us a curve in Janice. Your version has her rather within the Fold of `Family`, and it fits for Dawn to have someone for herself. Yes, just a friend.
This was nice, thanks again.
person animism
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable story!