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for Complicated Grief

by PencilNeck

person m.bailey
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, you're a wonderful writer. just, wow.
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is wicked. Best lines so far:

Pressing her mouth against Faith?s ear, she whispers. ?One reason. Right now. Why I shouldn?t keep squeezing ?till you burst.?

?Top of my head? How ?bout? giant crowd of witnesses?? Faith hisses back.

person animism
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice story