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Oh, man, wow. This is new. A vampire Buffy. It's also really good. I wish more people would think like you, but then, there would be too many genius' running around and that wouldn't be good. I like it. I kinda feel bad for Buffy, though. On her knees, ready to be generous with her mouth and the guy turns out to be a flake. It's ridiculous. And then no sex for a while seems to be ridiculous. It's crazy. Oh, nine drafts, you say? Yay. I'm so happy. This is really good.

I don't know whym but I always find it funny when people make threats that they really can't back up, especially Buffy since she's chained to the bathtub and all. The whole scenario with the sun was...it totally surprised me, but in a good way. Spike/William's a good guy if he cares that much to get revenge for his beloved. Buffy actually begging for her life surprised me because I usually don't like to cry, but it actually brought tears to my eyes. I can understand how Spike would think Buffy's lying and all. After all, vampires are cold and heartless and...yeah. It's really good though. I like how realistic you're keeping this.

The torture actually had me cringing. It's nice to see that Spike/William has a heart after all. I really, really like how you're dragging this out without rushing it, though I kinda get the feeling that Angelus is gonna be cold to Buffy or something is gonna happen to make her return to William, right? Well, only you know that. But, it's really good. You're freaking amazing. A genius. I'm jealous. Actually, with the torture, it was very realistic. I'm surprised that he let her go that quick, though. Still good. I like it. Post more soon, 'kay?

Why do I get the feeling that when Buffy returns home, things aren't going to go well for her? You're great, Addie. Keep up the great work.

Wow. Just wow. I've always enjoyed reading your work, but this one has me strongly captivated. It's just so different from the other things I've read. Please update soon? Please?

Wow.Wow.Wow.Wow. Speech has seriously just left me right now. I don't even know how I'm functioning right now, though it could be because my brain is on autopilot. Wow. Buffy and... just wow. It's so good. I'm surprised that people haven't reviewed more for this, but I'm definitely captivated.

I'm going to cry. Please get another chapter out soon! I knew I should have waited until the fifth chapter was out before reading this. When will the next update be? Your writing is the best I've seen so far.

So what if you take a bit to update? It is still worth it. I'm glad I'm reading all three chapters at once, instead of having to wait for them to come. It's just that I really enjoy the way you write the characters, one of the best ways I've ever seen. And I'm not exagerating. That and you have a knack for writing in the perfect way for me to read. It's strange, but nice too. Moving on! next chapter

Wow. I really enjoyed reading this fic. I don't really read Buffy fics but I read your rk work and ended up reading everything you put out, thus landing me in the Buffy/William fanfic section.

I love the characterization, and the mature attitude William has, while still retaining that spark that is him. The interactions are very realistic and the pace is great. I look forward to reading more of your work

This is certainly new, but still very lovely. I can't say much since it's only been four chapters, but so far you've kept things slow enough to give the story a realistic edge but fast enough to give it spice. I really enjoy that about your writing style.