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April 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Is this finished? Or is there a sequel?
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok. Soo, I'm reading your story and loving it by the way. But you need a beta, baadd, just for the little thing though. Anyway my question is, can I do it!!! Cause I'm already like in chap. 9.
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I'm totally hooked. I can't wait to read more & how they are going to beat the Council. Many many stars & do continue writing & updating. It's absolutely fantastic.
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say this story has a nice concept to it. The only advice I can give is work on your sentence structure and imagery. In the very first chapter one of your last sentences used the word and about five times and ran on almost forever. Unfortunately I didn't get past the fourth chapter. The way you keep jumping past events is very distracting. Still though, nice idea.
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it so much but i'm confused was that the end
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
spike is so sweet! love your story!
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok you made me cry now happy? i love this so much it makes me wanna go eat comfort food and get a box a tissues. u are so freakin talented
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just one word to describe this chapter SHOCKING, in a good way and a bad way
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i so freaking love this need more STAT
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the cliffhanger