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by Virtualpersonal

person Dherea
schedule July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like Willow's dark side-tamed by Spike. Very sensuous. Elevator scene was hot!!! Good job!
person Tenshi
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is epic win!! A few girls in my Bio class told me about it cause we were talking about spillow and omg, I cant say enough how well you wrote this! Ill be going in later today to thank them for giving me the link to your story! This was excellent!
person zoo
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Spike was a bit out-of-character by saying "yeah?" a lot and breaking out those three words so early, as was Willow with the constant blushing; she mostly stammers. Still, it was an enjoyable read.
person marissa
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A testament to how much i loved this: i stayed up until 4 am reading it. i usually go for fics with one shot plots (or, really, no plot at all) but i got so roped into this. VERY well done. and your writing is excellent. you actually have a varied vocabulary which, sadly, is difficult to find. it reads like a season of the show, or a plotline in it, and also like an actual book, rather than something someone threw together so they could write and adult content fic. Rather than blathering about how good it was for another five minutes... love it, amazing job, and please, please keep writing. you're quite awesome. Much love,
~Marissa
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's so refreshing to read a story that can be erotic and sexy without a lot of swearing and such.Thank you!
person Alowen
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story! I love a good Willow/Spike pairing. Definitely write more :)
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Needless to say I love this story.
Most authors wait forever to get the main people together and by that time readers don't care anymore. But you waited the right amount of time to keep the tension high but also give the readers a taste of whats to come. At the same time, you finally made the characters come together (pun intended :)) but still created enough tension that the reader doesn't get bored! If that made any sense to you, I don't know :)
I love reading about Willow's downward spiral into wanting what she wants without worrying about right or wrong. You still stay true to character while taking her on a different path.
I love how Spike gives into her, but also cares enough to not want to hurt her. You kept these characters three dimensional and that makes them so interesting to read.
Plus it's exciting and I want to know how this will turn out for them...especially if anyone finds out it.
The elevator scene was awesome by the way! Very hot, and very funny.
Keep going!
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Neat story so far. There is decent tension between Spike and Willow. Waiting to see where it goes.
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You did it again!
*haha* I find myself so excited to see a new chapter and then sad when it's all done :(
I have never even thought of Spike with anyone but Buffy, but you make it work and you make it exciting.
Way to go.
Update soon (like now would be good)
person kil
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. Please keep writing and please add some more soon!!!