rate_review Reviews

I really like this story. This is definitely new territory for me. I don't know if your concept has been used before, but you are doing a very good job. I totally aplaud your efforts and encourage you to write more please.

Well, first off, I have to say I love what you've done with the story so far. You've got a great feel for the characters, as they come off like they've just stepped out of the show. As well as having a good grip of the pokegirl world. How ever I would suggest two things, one is you might want to get a proof-reader to go over your story, just little errors breaking the flow of the story. And the other would be that you really don't have to give the long version of the locations every time you change scenes, usually just the first time you show that area, then shorten it each time you revisit it.
Can't wait to see more, especially since I'm still curious as to what happened to Giles and Buffy's Mom.