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for Heart's Desire

by PencilNeck

person TheDeal
schedule May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story soooooo f'n much. You are endlessly awesome for writing it and doing it so well. Thanks for this!
person anon
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. I literally stayed up till 7AM because I couldn't stop reading. I wasn't sure how you were going to end it, how you could end it, but it was perfect. I'm kinda awful at the whole review thing, but everyone was beautifully in character, it was very emotional and well paced, and I wish this was fanfiction .net so I could put you on alert.
person Alex
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I finished reading Heart's Desire a couple of nights ago at about 3 in the morning... I would have reviewed then but my alarm goes off at half five, so... Fantastic story, amazing plot and you have all the voices down pat. Thank you so much for your great fic!
Alex
person Batzulger
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful and rang true to the very last sentence.
person SlayerGirl
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What to say? I have never read a more canon, believable, heart-wrenching, dramatic work of fan-fiction before. I have read plenty of other tries into the realm that is 'fan-fiction.' Those bastardizing the characters, drowning the plot, and dropping lemons like the leaves from a tree in the fall. But no, this story was amazing. You left the readers, well, this reader on the edge of her seat the whole ride. It holds all that a good story should - action, adventure, love, loss, friendship and promise of the future. You have blown me away. I wish you all the best in your authoric adventures. Too bad BtVS is no longer on the air, you could've gotten a job as a writer for the show. Cheers!
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey all,

Not sure if this is kosher, but just wanted to say thanks to everyone who's reading and reviewing this story. Your comments are always read and always appreciated.
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You rule for keeping this story alive!
Keep updating, please!
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love the story so far please write more. I can't wait to see if Faith and Buffy get their ' Happily ever after'
person chris
schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Simply amazing, u had me begining and now eagerly waiting for the final chapters. Great job!
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, good chapter.
I actually felt sorry for the bad guy
Keep it coming, please?