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for Tempt Me Not

by addielogan

person yubi
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely luvd this story! all your stories actually although there's some i havent read yet, im working on that =]
person Cramer
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. You did a wonderful job.
person kudagirl
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You hit several points in your story that always bothered me. Buffy depended to heavily on other peoples' opinions of her. Willow and Tara should have paid rent or got jobs to help out on during the sixth season of the show. Buffy had to carry all the weight by herself which was not fair. Xander was always written as the jealous idiot who hated Buffy chosing either Angel or Spike over him. He only liked Riley because it gave him hope that a human man might have a chance with her. Buffy always moped over not being able to have what she thought was a normal life. A normal relationship would not have worked in her life. She would always have been worried about protecting a guy while fearing she might damage him. A normal guy would have endangered her life. Love all your stories.
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet. Buffy and Spike. Yeah I would have to be one of those people who thought there would be more. Something like a Epilogue when Spike and Tara have moved in and things like that.
person Millie
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant story from a gifted teller. Thank you! Can't wait for another!
person MysticAngel77
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh how I wish some of these issues you addressed in this chapter would have been brought up in the series, just to see what would play out. I enjoy this story for the "what would happen if..." aspect of it and the plausible ooc'ness that happens with maturity. Anywho, I hope you are feeling better :)
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it update soon please
person Anon
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally. Xander got the beating he deserved - verbally and physically. Great job. I really think you're doing a lovely job of this.
person Bravo
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why the hell don't you have more reviews for this story?!? It's GENIUS!
person Anon
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh, i love it. and i absolutely have no sympathy for willow. petty bitch. update soon, hun.