rate_review Reviews

WOW!!! Can I have some more!!
Awesome story!

Great! Please don't kill Joice. Update soon!!

Great start! Update soon!!

i'm just the tinyist bit confused about this one. i think it's going to take some getting used to with all the differnt ways of talking but i can deal with that. it's defernatly an original consept but (and i'm trying to say this in the nicest posible way) i think it would help the flow of your story if u didn't reveal things all in one go. But thats just my opinion.

anyway i would still like to see where this goes which means that you have to keep updateing :D ta ta for now.

lycanthrope