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for Then there were Three

by JLH

schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hope you return to this someday as I'd like to know what happens next.
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved this as with all your story's I can never get enough I might get lost sometimes but I will always come back to you.

Thank you
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know, I didn't even have an account to review!!! I HAD to MAKE an account, so you better take this into consideration even though I am just one person. I personally have just read what has been written so far and it has sucked me in. I am interested in it, but then again I am a very strong follower of all your writings. You make the characters in your story come to life and bring the story to life as well. This story has also had me crying at one point (when Xander's coworker came in and saw his living situation and sent a prayer to wherever). You have a way of making it all (well I can't say believable because it is a sci-fi/fantasy genre) but it all has real personality. It isn't just a simple story of 'oh this happenned... everything will be alright in a few months now'.

This story has real personality and it shows that people who go through such trauma do take a long time to recover from it, it's a long process and sometimes seems hopeless sometimes. I always see this represented through Willow's character. I've seen so many stories where (I won't say lesser) authors try to use a traumatic event as a plot point but don't carry it through correctly the way you do.

Please don't abandon this story *hugs* *many many many huggles*
Me love you long time?