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for My Immortal

by XxxFIVEbyFIVExxX

schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well... I liked it until she got turned. I don't know how I feel about it now. Kind of numb I guess. I don't know if I can keep reading it after this. I'll think about it. Good job with the beginning though. I liked the strange relationship they had when she was 16. I guess him coming back "evil" when she was 18 threw me. I definitely don't like that version of him. Ugh. I can't read this. Sorry *scurries off*
person Millie
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm still with you on this story-just been working a lot lately. Wow, I didn't see him turning her coming! Keep posting, please!
person Millie
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the cliffhanger! Thanks for posting-keep it up Please!
person OfCakeAndIceCream
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE it.

Please update soon, amazing fic!
person millie
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! I've been reading it all in one sitting, and I'd love some updates soon, Five! Thanks!

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