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March 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story. The characterizations are believable and the story moves right along.
My only problem I had with the story was the ridiculous lack of punctuation. In mean, for the love of Spike, what do you have against putting a period at the end of a sentence?
At least, 50% of you sentences had no punctuation at the end. It probably doesn't a lot of people but it drove me out of my mind. It just doesn't make sense and it's beyond annoying
especially when you're reading a paragraph and there's no punctuation between the 4 or 5 sentences in that paragraph. I almost gave up on finishing the fic because of this
irritating occurrence. As I said, maybe it's me, but I have sworn off reading fics that lack punctuation (yours is not the first). Having said that, your storyline is good and the characters
remained true to the series.
My only problem I had with the story was the ridiculous lack of punctuation. In mean, for the love of Spike, what do you have against putting a period at the end of a sentence?
At least, 50% of you sentences had no punctuation at the end. It probably doesn't a lot of people but it drove me out of my mind. It just doesn't make sense and it's beyond annoying
especially when you're reading a paragraph and there's no punctuation between the 4 or 5 sentences in that paragraph. I almost gave up on finishing the fic because of this
irritating occurrence. As I said, maybe it's me, but I have sworn off reading fics that lack punctuation (yours is not the first). Having said that, your storyline is good and the characters
remained true to the series.
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
argh u can't leave it there, best story i've read in ages please update
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is an awesome idea. you write it well, and i hope you write more!