rate_review Reviews

I loved this fic right up until the last part. I think it would have been better if the baby was basically normal. Maybe having a few slayer/vamp attributes
like extra strength and extended life. I think the whole protector, guardians, army etc etc was a bit too much and made thing too unbelievable.
Having said that, I truly did love love the majority of the story. Good job.

Yes, I like this very much. More, please!