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by Kinetickid

schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How many times can you jerk off without taking a bit of a breather?!! (You know, for a few bucks you can get the results you're looking for, complete with PICTURES you can literally touch on the glossy page, and sometimes they even have 'scratch and sniffs' (which sounds like it would be right up your alley). And best of all, you don't end up with all the sticky fluids on your screen and keyboard!)

I'll admit sometimes I'd like to smack the writer upside the head *bg* when she tortures the characters and the readers, but it's called foreplay, and the sex when it 'cums' is well worth the wait!

Haven't you ever teased yourself, or do you just go directly in to the 'slaphappy' phase? Try it sometime, you just might like it!

Not everyone is here just to visit a prostitute and 'get off' quickly and efficiently!

Minion!

Sorry, KK! You can delete this, but I just felt like 'venting' a little! ; )
person willowfan
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, it's one of my favorites. I loved the Rogue Slayer too. I wish your Muse would come back and you could finish Family, I miss the characters. As for the post on your site, I have to admit I read and don't reveiw. The problem being my Outlook Express does not work and I tell myself I'll reveiw here and then just don't make the time to come here and do it. Sorry if it seems you're writing is for naught, cause I love it all. All the stories are well done, very believable and the characters problems seem so real and heartfelt. Don't stop just cause we as a group are lazy, and don't tell you often enough that we love your work.
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Willowfan,

You know when you scroll the pointer over those feedback buttons that the addy shows up at the bottom of your browser??? Which means that you don't have to specifically use Outlook Express!! Hmm... just a thought! ; )

Minion butting in again! : )
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cough* Not to mention the Guestbook there!

Minion, being a PITA!! : )
person ..
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are a good writer, but i think the plot is a little to slow.

Most people come to this site for the juicy sex, and as i like the plot just as well (i mean it's better when you have a point to the good stuff then just plain sex) but it needs to go faster.

I'm sorry but it was just a little boring for me, however your writing is good and i'm sure you will do beter when you update this
person tsh
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great update. It looks like the girls will be leaning on each other for strength, and I don't think Willow will want to mess with Tara since Buffy is very protective of her.
person qwerty
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love your stuff. You have a neat concept that is plausible within the buffyverse. When's your next update? (Sorry, I'm very impatient!)
person Jen
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more more more....please?
person tsh
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the start of the new one KK. I can't wait to see what happens in the morning or better yet if the girls sleep through the night.