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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome fic. Riddick+Xander=happy chibifae. i really like how u saved the kids and Shazza. Update update update. i need more good stuff to read.
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! (Does Snoopy Dance) Nice long chapter, yes yes yes. The only thing better would be smut, this is fantastic and I love how Xander being their changes the story in little ways, I do that too in my fics cos I feel it makes it that much more realistic. Fantastic work, I love Riddick and Xander's interaction. I so understand about real life but consider me part of your cheer squad who will encourage you to write and who cares about real life :-)
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantabulous update, and so long too! I love the fact that you saved Ali and had Xan suggest the younger ones be left behind. (Aint logic grand! ^_^) I think this one deserves a double batch of virtual cookies! ::applause::
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
smoking hot!
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story keep up the good work thanks for writing it.
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww! i'm loving this story. It's awesome how you're making Xander have to fight off other's attentions on Riddick. Keep it up and I think it'll be good if you add the COR to this just see Xander's reaction to Vakko and Dame Vakko! update soon please!
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Don't fret too much over the mistakes, I know I do the same thing writing my stories. You get into that groove and just have to write, but your fingers don't listen to what your brain wants to type. Besides, it's mostly just a couple of missed letters. The meaning still gets across, so I don't think you have to go over it with a fine toothed comb. Anyway, I await the next update!
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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 9: Dreamy, drool worthy, and all kinds of other steamy descriptive type words.
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I've just found this and read it straight through whoops I was supposed to be studying oh well. This is fantastic I'm well and truly hooked I like Riddick/Xander pairings and Pitch Black was a fantastic movie. I'll be looking for the next chapter in the next week
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have to update soon! This so got me hooked onto Riddick/Xander, and I'm normally not that big of a yaoi fan. Despite the quality plot-line, character development, and all that good crud, maybe you should slow down and proofread your chapters. I've noticed a few grammatical and spelling errors. Except that, great stroy and I can't wait for the next update!