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yay! You updated... awesome new chapter. Hope to see more soon!

Yes! I've caught up! And is the multi-tasking not going well? do we have to continue our lessons? Probably so. And you left us hanging!! And I thought I was evil...Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter.

By all means, let me review so that you'll type faster. I love Riddick, I have since the first movie. I like him for the same reason I like mercenaries. There is nothing wrong with self preservation as long as you keep your word. Keep it coming, you're doing great.

More soon pleasee?!

The tension BUILDS!!!!!!!!
[Audience gasps]
BWA-HA-HA!!! Who will live and who will bite the Big One?! Tune in next time kiddies!
Man I love this story!

Oh you poor thing, don't worry about it as a writer I totally understand that RL gets in the way and sometimes writing has to go to the side. As for the interlude chapter I thought it was brilliant and explained alot. Your not going to please everyone all the time no matter how hard you try so instead just try and write the plot bunny that won't get out of your mind to the best of your considerable ability. I will be avidly waiting for the next part no matter how long it takes to sort out your real life.

Ahhh I missed reviewing a chapter, silly silly me. I don't know where my head was at. This is fantastic I love the revelation and the changing the future bit, fantastic. Can't wait for more

this is turning out awesome! i can't wait for you next update! are they all going to survie or are you going to kill them off close to the skiff? update soon please!!

great new chapter. shorter then the others. But i was happy to see one. You really are a fast updater! Hope to see more soon@

It would honestly make things easier if you would add the rest of this chapter on the story as a new chapter that way we won't be as confused when we go back to look and see if you have updated we can just look at the chapter number and tell that their's not thirdteen chapters but fourteen. YaY chapters!! LOL anyway love the story accually i whole heartly believe that Riddick should be with Xander only because every story i've read sounds very good and they honestly do make a good couple....well gotta go please update soon, but don't rush and accidently make a mistake. take your time think it out and give yourself time to rethink every step that way if something comes out wrong you can go back and fix it!!

Tigeress =^-^=