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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story and great plot, but you need a beta badly. Or at least spellcheck. I would hate for anyone to not read your work because of a small thing like spelling. Keep writing. You are very good at it.
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes three chapters (Does Snoppy Dance) Fantastic. And Angel has found him great. Will Dawn ring and Angel answer Spike's phone cos then Angel will find out what's happened in Sunnydale as well as that Spike hasn't left Dawn. Can't wait for more I love Spangel and this is shaping up to be a great one.
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start, can't wait for more
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to seeing what you plan for this story.