rate_review Reviews

If youd please right again soon I'll be a big fan of your writing

Buffy is OOC. She's super sensitive and weak. Angelus is a supervillain and unkillable. You said claims were unbreakable but Buffy seems to switch claims every other chapter now. Why didn't they just kill Darla when they were in front of her house? Dru was "out of it" like she always is so she wouldn't have been a threat. Instead they just gave Angelus back to them?! Would never happen. You're taking a lot of liberties since it's not an AR and not thinking things through just to make your story seem dramatic. Too unbelievable for me.

Just started re-reading the story as it's been awhile, and I like the way you're developing the characters. Has potential to bring out a few more personality details from time to time as the relationship develop further.

I hope you'll soon update the story. I think the last time was about May08? I'm hopeful you haven't lost interest/muse?

I loved the story and I hope that it will be finished(sp) someday(hopefully this year). I also hope that the wroter of this wonderful story will contitue(sp) to write and keep this great gift for words.

Thank you!

Very interesting. I like read your story. Please continue.

Neat story! :)

Great story! I'm sorry for Cordy...Not!!!!

Excellent story. I like it very much. I hope to see continuation soon.