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for The Art of Immortality

by dusty273

schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i so love this need more stat
person Crash
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*collapses*

Oh My God.

Yeah I just got a bit light-headed here. *fans at self* Um. Wow. Kinda speechless here. Still a little woozy.

Freakin awesome. I'm gonna be very sad when this story is done, but I'm loving it!
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it so much
person Crash
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow..you never disappoint with a chapter. I think I forgot to breathe through most of it. Didn't realize it till I got a little light headed near the end and suddenly took in a huge breath.

But, darn you for leavin off like that. *shakes fist* :-)
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww could this get any cuter um i think not. cant wait for more
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The part in this latest chapter revolving around his sense of smell was covered in the previous chapter via - ?I can smell your? desire.? She blushed, lowering her lashes to avoid his gaze. So it's kind of strange that she'd wonder again if he could tell she was aroused or not.

Anywho, very nice chapter with a surprise blurting of the 'I love you'! :) Can't wait to read more, and hope for more intense chapters ahead.
person Millie
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too! This chapter was amazing as always. "Doofus" is such a Buffy thing to say-how cute!
person Crash
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woooooooooo!! Just in time for Christmas! Another great chapter. I like the calling him a doofus part haha. Cute.

Can't wait for more!! Darn your muse workin ahead of the chapters you're on. *shakes fist*
person Anon
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story soooooooooo much and look forward to reading more of it :)
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww so cute