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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good story almost ruined by lack of editing.
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think that this story is very interesting. There were a few distracting spelling errors but otherwise it is a very good story.
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm xander n riddik could it get any hotter! loooove ur story sofar can't wait for ur next update please please update soon x
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome and cute. Hope to see a sequel!
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you?r writing a sequel, I?m reading it!
You ware right to putt Riddick?s pov, it completes the picture?
Good work :D
You ware right to putt Riddick?s pov, it completes the picture?
Good work :D
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June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like the ending, it?s sweet and peaceful and it?s what Xader deserves, he?s earned that much?
It might be a good idea to se what Riddick has to say about it, I always enjoy reading from his point of view. So that?s a yes on my part for Riddick?s pov?.
Love the story, short but keep?s your heart pumping?:D
Nice job
It might be a good idea to se what Riddick has to say about it, I always enjoy reading from his point of view. So that?s a yes on my part for Riddick?s pov?.
Love the story, short but keep?s your heart pumping?:D
Nice job
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June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Though I had a thought... Why don't you have him return to earth (if possible) with Riddick and a child. A child that looks EXACTLY like William (Pre-vamp Spike).
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June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very cool. I would be interested in seeing a chapter of what's going thru Riddick's mind.
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW MAN
LOVE WHAT UVE DONE WITH THIS AND I CANT WAIT FOR MORE...SO PLEASE DONT MAKE ME UPDATE SOON!
LOVE WHAT UVE DONE WITH THIS AND I CANT WAIT FOR MORE...SO PLEASE DONT MAKE ME UPDATE SOON!
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Come on, what happens next? Hurry up, you've got me hooked.