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for Breaking Faith

by ToughLove

schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A great champter. I loved the sister play. Can't wait for if and when you get to Wes.
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Christmas Toy- This was very rushed and the whole traning her and beating her was not my style. Hopefullly the next chapter isn't so..rough. 5/10.
person Jen
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loverly Loverly Loverly.... i loved it.... usually i don't like seeing a dark Willow. but you have made me addicted to this story.. please keep going!!
person Oric13
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8 - A Christmas Toy Not a bad chapter, but it felt a bit rushed.
person d.a.m
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This epic is as sick, twisted and enthralling as anything i have ever seen!
My mouth is drooling and my head is spinning at the idea of this continuing, so please do!
person Oric13
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter! Initially I was a bit worried when you paired Faith up with Andrew, figuring that the little wuss is no match for her, but somehow you made it work.

I love how Andrew got increasingly more confident and assertive, and even a bit dominating towards the end. And I loved Faith's increasing need to be dominated, and seeing how much she got off on it, even more.

Also really liked it when Willow showed up and gave her bitch a good fisting while Andrew watched.

Faith's realization that she's a dirty slut and Willow's bitch made for a great ending.

Can't wait to see what you come up with next :)
person Joe
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter. I like what you did with Andrew and would love to see more. As much as I like the kink, I love the softer almost sweeter element to this chapter.
person Oric13
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed this latest installment.
Favourite parts were the description of Faith in bondage and Anya DPing her.
Can't wait to read what happens to Toy next.
person Corey
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. And since they didn't use any protection, how about having Faith get pregnant with Xander's baby? Anyway, update soon.
person Oric13
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Willow is one sadistic bitch :)
Can't believe she actually let those nasty people use her gorgeous Slayer-slave as a urinal! Poor Faith.
It seems her training is really catching on now; looks like it won't be that long before she'll willingly be drinking piss just to please her Mistress.

Keep up the great work!