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9/10. Any chance Connor will show up?

Pros: under the table with Kennedy, and the bullriding.

Cons: The Farris Wheel and fratboys. Having Faith ride ontop of the basket was really silly

Another well written chapter with some good humiliation. My favourite part was definitely the under the table stuff though.

For me the idea of Buffy not being attractive is completely alien but to each their own I guess and there are plenty of characters that could kick Willow's ass in my opinion but I guess we'll just have to agree to disagree on that as well.

Looking forward to your next update.

I like the cop gimmick, but now I wonder what you gonna do with Kate LOL

You were right, I loved this chapter. I especially loved Rona trying to out do Vi when it came to fucking Faith and the DP. Also loved Faith becoming Rona's little white bitch, that was hot. The cop scenario also worked very well in my opinion.

For me, Willow's powerful, but not all-powerful and certainly not powerful enough to take down Buffy. The younger slayers yes, Faith maybe (your story offers a convincing scenario that she could) but, in my opinion, not Buffy.

I had a feeling from your Buffy/Dawn chapter that you prefer Dawn, but hotter than Buffy? Maybe as hot. But then again I can't force you to like Buffy and we're all entitled to our own opinions. There are after all plenty of great stories featuring Buffy if I want to read about Buffy. Although I am happy to hear Dawn will be reappearing, I have to agree she's hot, although there are a lot of hot women on this show and I'm not sure I could pick a favourite.

I was wondering if this story was going to have an end or if it was just going to continue until you ran out of ideas. Although obviously it's sad to think that this great story is coming to an end I'm rather intrigued how you plan on ending this and greatly look forward to reading the end when it finally comes.

I hope the story goes out with a bang.

I really like the story. However since you are having Willow let people use Faith for revenge, you have to let Xander have her. Since Faith almost killed Xander, you should have Xander dominate "French Maid Faith".

I liked the secretary theme, but not the dad giving intructions. I also thought Wes was dead. If Wes was going to be used, I would've liked a 1 on 1, cus of their history.

What about Connor? Or Illyria? She seems Dom even on a good day.

Nice little update. Good to see Wesley included, he was a fun character, and as stated in the chapter Faith owed that family. As a matter of fact perhaps Faith got off a bit lightly considering she tortured Wesley, but then again if I were Wesley I'd definitely prefer this type of revenge lol.

I didn't mean to be too overly critical of your story, I was just speaking my mind. I hope I didn't offend you, and I hope I won't offend you by speaking my mind again.

I understand in this reality Willow was never 'saved' by Xander and all, and in some ways I like Willow as a Dom (I liked her clothing and attitude in season 3 and 6), it's just that unfortunately for me personally every time I read a story where Willow is a Dom I can't help think of the end of season 6 and it kind of spoils it a little for me. But don't get me wrong I understand just because that's how I feel doesn't mean that's how everyone feels and I'm not trying to say that there is no way Willow could be a Dom, I'm just saying I find it a little hard to believe she could enslaves someone like Faith when she herself has many self-esteem issues. I could possibly see her dominating Tara, and Kennedy who in my opinion deserves a spanking much more than Faith, and other characters, but a slayer?

As for Faith, I can see her being a Dom because of her outward attitude or a Sub because as you say she has self-esteem issues, and the concept of her being broken and turned into somebody's bitch is great which is why I kept coming back to the story but as stated for me personally I just had issues with Willow being the one to break Faith, however as I believe I've already said these issues are more to do with me than they are to do with your great story.

As for Kennedy I would have rather Willow break her and have two Toys instead of sharing her pet but again that's just my opinion and I'm sure there are probably many people out there that would like to see Kennedy as a Dom. And although I didn't like her character I will admit she was hot.

My criticism of the immortal stands.

I can understand your reluctance to use the Illyria character, and have to agree there is no way Willow could control Illyria, although in my opinion Willow could watch Illyria as she plays with Faith just to make sure her bitch doesn't come to any real harm, but it's your story I'm just making suggestions.

I hope you consider including other Angel characters like the girl with the lightning powers (I can't remember her name), the werewolf girl (again can't remember her name, and can't remember if you've used her yet or not, I remember there being a character or two I didn't recognise a while back) and Kate the cop (I may have just accidentally guessed who will show up in the next chapter, but then again I could be wrong).

And hey, I'd love to read a Buffy/Angel reunion chapter or maybe even a Buffy/Angel/Spike reunion chapter where the reuniting characters use Faith as their slave. I mean surely Buffy and Angel owe Faith pain for trying to break them up in season 3, and I'm pretty sure Spike wouldn't have a problem with punishing Faith, either for winding him up in season 4 or for that little disagreement they had in season 7 or for just being mean to Buffy. Speaking of Buffy it surprises me she isn't featured much in this story given the fact that Buffy has a lot more issues with Faith then Willow does.

Anyway, keep up the good work and if I ever review this again I'll try not to mention once again my small critical problems with your awesome story.

I loved the last 2 chapters. Any Slayer on Slayer stuff is near gold. I say near because the pee play is not my thing.