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December 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, Faith was just gang-raped! Those guards are now worse criminals than she is!- I really don't think those evil cops will stop hurting her.
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May 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So... I'll start by saying that I generally enjoyed the story, and the premise -- Willow channeling her darkness into sex instead of violence -- was a good one.
Unfortunately, I had three main issues with the story:
1. The sex partners became faceless after a while. By the time W&K started sharing her around, the people fucking Faith had ceased to be differentiated.
2. Language -- a lot of the word usage and repetition really took me out of the story. Some of it was downright silly.
3. Redemption. Faith didn't escape (I know, she didn't want to), no one rescued her, and no one took Willow to task in the end. I think I needed that to happen to really enjoy the piece.
I'd love to see a version of this where the same things happen but somehow the above issues are minimized. I realize this is a sex story through and through, and that's fine, but after a while it just stopped working for me. Perhaps it just got too long.
Still, good creativity.
Unfortunately, I had three main issues with the story:
1. The sex partners became faceless after a while. By the time W&K started sharing her around, the people fucking Faith had ceased to be differentiated.
2. Language -- a lot of the word usage and repetition really took me out of the story. Some of it was downright silly.
3. Redemption. Faith didn't escape (I know, she didn't want to), no one rescued her, and no one took Willow to task in the end. I think I needed that to happen to really enjoy the piece.
I'd love to see a version of this where the same things happen but somehow the above issues are minimized. I realize this is a sex story through and through, and that's fine, but after a while it just stopped working for me. Perhaps it just got too long.
Still, good creativity.
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is hot as hell. Wish I was faith...
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Didn't see that ending coming!
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bring back the giant breasts.
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fucking right man. Hot and twisted. 8/10
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot, but disturbing. Loved more Faith/Andrew. 9/10
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Anything with Dawn makes me hard, but Dawn and Faith was double fun. I could've lived with out the weird Kennedy scene. That costs you a perfect chapter.
8/10
8/10
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You'd think with Willow constantly casting spells to make people comfortable with screwing Faith that someone would eventually build up a resistance to it. While it wouldn't be as much fun it would be an interesting change in dynamic for Willow to tell someone to go bang Faith and that person says no.
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I found the spinning wheel thing quite silly but it led to lesbian strap on anal sex which I always enjoy reading so all in all I enjoyed the first half. The second half, not so much. Once again you've used a character I can't stand, Riley Finn, who I'd have rather just been left out of the story. I mean what's the worst Faith ever did to him. Slept with him. Please. Buffy was the one wronged in that situation, not captain charismaless. And I found it very strange having Ethan Rayne being with the military since the last time he was seen on Buffy he was being dragged away by them. But when I ignored which characters were featured in this update I found it was very easy to enjoy, after all the idea of Faith fucking three guys is hot, and it was well written, so keep up the good work.