rate_review Reviews

I really enjoyed this story and looking forward to reading the sequel. Happy New Year!

even heaven cries!!!

Good. I will admit that this last chapter when I saw "END" I was very unhappy and felt let down. Then saw the note that it was TBC in the next part felt better. I hope you take this kindly as I truly enjoyed this story, but the last chapter was unsatisfying. It felt almost like you just wanted to be finished with it and the care and creativity previous chapters had just was not there. I felt very unfinished. I am hoping that the first chapter(s) of the next part bring back the care and feeling you gave the earlier chapters.

I have also read "Even Heaven Crys" and felt some of the passion and joy here. I expect it will answer many of the questions on the what/how happened to place them in their current situation, and finding out just how they got there is as exciting and where they will go from the point you left us.

Continue on please. I there is depth that comes thru that is touching without being sappy or too sweet. The story has very dark edges, and I hope you are willing to allow those to come out for what they are as well as for the light that you have shown is there at the end of Tears of the Soul.

With respect.
Takhen

yes a longer chapter!
cookie for u ....and a brownie lol
cant wait to find out what else is happin!

wooo hooo!
yeah finaly
i just wish u would make ur chaps longer
i love what uve done...so what happend to tha people that rescued xan?
ill give u a cookie if u make ur chaps longer ....swear i will

Yeah they are really starting to get back together, fantastic, update soon.

yummy kissage for the boys!!! always HOT!! and they have a boy and a girl!! that's so sweet!! what are their names!?! so cute, they look like their maddy (maternal daddy). so cute, me got the total 'awww's. so does this mean that he could get preggas in the future as well? and we still don't know who the masked men that carried xan out of the motel were. and do the twins know about anything that happened to their dad? considering the fact that he often has nightmares, have they ever overheard anything or questioned it? i got so many questions and i want so much more, you temptress you. cyber chocolate brownies for updates darling!!!
xoxoxo

WANT MORE NOW!!!!!

Good work for the chapter, angel and spike seem to be exactly on the same wavelength all the time. Update soon.

as usual, i love you yet i am extremeley disgruntled cause i am an impatient git who wants to know what happens NOW and you are a tease. but lovely update despite that *grins*. so i have a question, i noticed that mystic was hinting at a prequal, and i wanna know if the other story you were working on, was it intended to be the prequal to this? it fits. and i would be more than interested in reading a prequal (as in pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease i want it i want it i want it!!!) but for now i will settle for an update to this delicious morsel of a story. perhaps we get to find out what happened to the twins? twins, hah, atb, i told you it was twins!!! nya nya!! snoopy dance!!
xoxoxo