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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful and amazing and delicious! Every fangirl's dream ^-^
I love the way you portrayed Spike and Xander. Spike is his cocky self but still very insecure and sweet; and Xander is strong and gentle and compassionate and still with a temperament. And I love the world you put them in, it seems so real and whole and believable.
The way you moved the plot was perfect: easy and natural, not rushing but taking the time that the scenes needed. And the way you evolved their relationship and their characters was amazing too :D and then there are the several but endlessly new sex scenes which were just *shivers and melts rendered speechless*
There's so many great points in this story that I can't possibly point them all out. I just love this <3
I love the way you portrayed Spike and Xander. Spike is his cocky self but still very insecure and sweet; and Xander is strong and gentle and compassionate and still with a temperament. And I love the world you put them in, it seems so real and whole and believable.
The way you moved the plot was perfect: easy and natural, not rushing but taking the time that the scenes needed. And the way you evolved their relationship and their characters was amazing too :D and then there are the several but endlessly new sex scenes which were just *shivers and melts rendered speechless*
There's so many great points in this story that I can't possibly point them all out. I just love this <3
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story and although it's an au, i think you portrayed the characters well. this has been one of the best stories that i've read in a while. hope you continue writing really good, touching stories.