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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey please you got to update this
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story soon!
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awsome. update soon
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start to the story and I'd like to see what happens next. The only bit of criticism I can give is make the chapters longer like instead of posting two short chapters every other day or however it is combind them and make it a longer chapter to add ever however many days it is. The only reason I say that is I just start reading the chapter and then it's over. It makes it really hard to get into a story like that. But I like the way it's going and how you can make it go from here. So hope to see more soon. TTFN. :)
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good fic hope to see more soon!
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too dang short!!! :)
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh... more please! hurry up!
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Short chapter but glad your updating can't wait for more
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just read this story and eagerly await more chapters... Is there anymore coming... love it
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how could you leave us with such a cliff hanger
and why him crashing into a house
please update soon
and why him crashing into a house
please update soon