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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what Buffy is going to do
with Spike now.
with Spike now.
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I mean "Eww". No, yay and eww. Love the biting part.
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oookay, wasn't expecting that. Can't wait for more.
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting twist with the chip malfunctioning! I really enjoy the fact that you gave Harmony an actual role that wasn't just a joke. I kind of cringe at how this will affect the Spike / Buffy thing going on with him being able to give Riley exactly what he deserves now - but this is still just the beginning! I'm confident that things will work out, and it's always well worth it through the angsty troubles they get into. Maybe he'll have some sort of guilt about full out killing Riley and not let that happen, just torture, but who knows.. it IS Spike. I'm sure Buffy wont be giddy that he's all with the homicide again, but she should at least be able to recognize that was his right as the victim to at least see Riley come to justice. Anywho, I'm glad you updated and will be around waiting for more! :) Longer chapters, longer longer longer! hehe
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very different, but I like it so far. :)
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright, an update! Sad it was so short, but you hit all the bases and that was nice! I'm hoping to see SOMEONE kicking some ass pretty soon though, but more build up is great and if there's going to be another abuse scene on poor Spike's part, I think it should be interrupted or at least something so that all doubts are erased that he could be lying about the incident. That's up to you though, I'm sure you know where you're headed with your own story, haha. Either way, I will be very happy to read once there's another update! :)
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very intense. well-written. Keep it up!
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol Glad I could help ^^
Joyce can be kinda scary when she gets mad, isn't she? lol
I really do hate that chip in Spike's head, making him run from Riley. Of course, he should have known better than leaving Giles' place. And with his luck, he's probably running in the wrong direction, isn't he?
Well, yet another good chapter, keep up the great work ^^
Talk atcha later
-Becky
Joyce can be kinda scary when she gets mad, isn't she? lol
I really do hate that chip in Spike's head, making him run from Riley. Of course, he should have known better than leaving Giles' place. And with his luck, he's probably running in the wrong direction, isn't he?
Well, yet another good chapter, keep up the great work ^^
Talk atcha later
-Becky
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey, nice idea, cool to read. I like how you write Spike, and I like the idea behind this peice. The one think I wonder about is how everyone manages to guess the right thing without every much information to go on at all, and always be right, like Harmoney for instense. Good luke, keep writing.
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I'm usually too lazy to sign in, but since you haven't been getting any reviews, I thought I'd take the time lol.
I really like this story. lol And Spike and Buffy getting drunk together is awesome. I can't wait until either Buffy or Harmony gets their hands on Riley. Stupid bugger.
Anyway, I love the story, keep up the great work, and update soon ^^
Talk atcha later
-Becky
I'm usually too lazy to sign in, but since you haven't been getting any reviews, I thought I'd take the time lol.
I really like this story. lol And Spike and Buffy getting drunk together is awesome. I can't wait until either Buffy or Harmony gets their hands on Riley. Stupid bugger.
Anyway, I love the story, keep up the great work, and update soon ^^
Talk atcha later
-Becky