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by ScarletIbis

person yubi
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great fic, kept me interested the whole way =]
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooooo! That was fun! If that's really the ending, it definitely leaves many many many openings for a sequel since we wonder if Joyce still has the brain tumor, would Willow still go bad magic, what about the nerdy trio, etc. Of course from here you could just re-create the rest of the series, but thats a pretty big undertaking. Was a great story, and I enjoyed your take on Drusilla and the explanation as to why she wasn't all with the intense crazies after drinking god blood.
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awsome ending didnt see it coming at all loved it
person Millie
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was great to see this post after so long! It was great!
person nikki
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow excellent hurry can't wait for more
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I started this fic somewhere and then lost it, so I'm glad to have found it again. Your characterisations are just about spot on if you can believe Riley's trip into darkness, which I sorta can. You never know what those Initiative drugs might have done to him after all, and he was getting more than any of the other guys.
I'm glad you haven't got Spike & Buffy jumping straight into bed together, that would have been inappropriate as they both need time to heal first.
I'm looking forward to the epilogue....
person Millie
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story!
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really sweet, and I'm definitely interested in the lengthy epilogue that is on it's way! I've enjoyed the ride in your story with your take on Buffy's character - she comes off a lot more mature and not as skittish about analyzing her feelings. I think you recognized that this story could really pull you in and suck tons of your time with all the details you could shove into it (I mean helloooo, tons of characters to go through), but you structured it well so that it didn't get too huge and then unfinishable. Thanks for the add, btw :) I'm sad that you wont be doing any more full length stories, but your one shots are really well written too so I can't complain too much! Goodluck with your real life endeavors, and I really hope to see more of your work at some point. Again, just want you to know that this plotline was a very nice change and I'm glad that it was written well! I hate to see great plots be destroyed by grotesque grammar or OOCness. Keep in touch missy!
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it
person Jags
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH! i love it keep going!!!!!!