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for Leading Lines

by JLH

person JLH
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
To the four reviewers ...

Thank you so much for your comments... the writers out here need that!

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person nulinka
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay XDD that's something I was waiting for. I hope your muse is in veeeeeeeeeeery good mood:>
person asydnes
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As obviously Xander and Spike are cognizant of things that occur when they inhabit these bodies so that they will remember them later to help Anton, I have to wonder if Xander will bear some psychological scars from Inditus' rape. *shivers* That was painful to read, but well written nonetheless.

*Mwah*
Dae
person asydnes
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, a sort of Quantum Leap plotline for this part of the arc! I'm intrigued by it, and eager for the next chapter. :) Also, I must say that your descriptions of Buffy's demise were very moving. Nice job so far!

*Mwah*
Dae
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am currently reading this through Bloodclaim an just like the other six stories this one is great. Exploring Anton's life is great. With Xander and Spike along for the ride being other people in his life is awesome. You do realize Anton did have a brush with Angelus, Spike, Darla and Drusilla. I hope you do that confrontation. Oh it would be great if Spike and Xander inhabited Spike and Angelus or even Darla and Drusilla. Like the other stories I know this will be a long one, and I am looking forward to each and every chapter.