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for The Worst Betrayal

by Eliza

schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey
I'm not normally into the whole slave thing, but this is really good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Keep up the great work.
Talk atcha later

-Becky
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a really good story. I can't wait to see how Spike reacts. Poor guy. Update soon!
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh godess! I know this is only a story, but I am finding myself disgusted with the level of torture that each of these vampires are being put through. We have always been led to believe that, with the exception of Spike, vampires were evil and deserved to be dusted. But this is just monstorus. Oh. I'm still getting shivers. It's just horrible. Poor Spike.. Good update, please do continue soon.
person TDK
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WoW! Just, WoW! Really enjoying what you have written so far, looking forward to reading more. Very original story line as well as capturing the characteristics of the Scoobies. Hope Spikey is allright, though, or at least not to far gone from being tortured. (Figure he is in the wacky dimension,right?)
person Vette56
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Spike, it looks like he really has been forgotten until he becomes useful again. Too bad Buffy only thinks of him when she needs muscle or relief. Anyway, good chapter, look forward to more.
person Vette56
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very intense story, look forward to reading more (worries for Spike).
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when anyone would notice that Spike was missing.
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a very descriptive chapter.
person Gillypod
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Spike's there isn't he. She will find him and get him out. Please!!!!
person Natalie Roselilly
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely interesting.