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for Bending of wills

by shadowslayers01

person pearlseed
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's turning out to be a very fine bit of reading and when I tough it out through all the chapters and really care about what happens to the characters, I hope there is a finale where the bad guy gets stomped like a cockroach and maybe even an epilouge cos those are always welcome. Yes, it was a hideously runon sentence, please forgive and write more please soon--curiousity is great and antsyiness is unattractive. Thanks for the good story to this point, it was hard work to fit it all together I know!!
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn just damn awsome cant wait for more
person nicki
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, i've been reading this from the beginning now so i thought hey lets tell her just how much i looooooooove it!!!!!!!
but god you are so mean! leaving us hanging like that. finally there seems to be some progress with them and you just stop. ahhhhh. i'm sick sniff lying in bed and sniff wanting some action at least reading about it sniff add a lot of pouting to that. more now... plzzzzzzzz
oh, parker still has all his body parts. i want them off. and certain parts ripped of and stuffed down his throat. it could be very graphic as well :)
kept it up! oh, and did i mention: more now!!!!
person tammy
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the update. I know she had all that trauma but I was glad to see some Spuffy loving. I want a Spike just as loving and kind as he is. And if he is a god in the sack, all the better!!
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it need more. buffy is gonna kill spike if she keeps that up lol
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now thats got me wondering could she see him or not or was she just practisind what she was going to say...Loved the paragraph where Angel got whacked with the frying pan...pleasing chapter once again you've really got the hang of things now well done....
person Gillypod
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
After the shaky start to the fic, you have improved your style with every chapter. The story is flowing so well now and I love the teasing between the two. I hope that love can cure all, I really do. Please keep updating, sweetheart, it's worth it
person tammy
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is so good. I loved the updates since I have last read it. It's turning out to be great. Thanks
person spikes mrs
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another lovely chapter it's getting better all the time..I really like this story and spent half the morning looking for it with the search engines help because I'm stuck in bed so I think that show you how much I'm enjoying it yeah ...Please update soon Jeanette {spikes mrs}
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it need more now please