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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is so cute and so sweet. I love it. I hope you update soon I'd really like to know what's going to happen. If Spikes still going to become a vamp or not?
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I completely luv this story. Please finish it. I'm anxiously awaiting what happens next. It's completely fasinating. I'm looking forward to reading more as it comes.
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I loved every. Single. Bloody. Chapter.
The characterization is spot on, the people come alive in your mind, I find myself reading almost entire chapters out loud, smiling like a poof at how cute William is and how Buffy is so helplessly drawn to it.
You capture the time period so well in your writing, the descriptions are elegant and a delight to devour. It's like I myself have been tossed back into time, being forced into the same kind of restrictions as Buffy while I verbally rail at my computer about the pointless social protocols. I can recall clearly at one point shouting: "Fuck it! Buffy, hang the rules and punch the bitch in the face- dear god please!"
As is bloody obvious, I'm in love with the damn story you've so artfully created. So much so that I took the time to create an account on adultff.net just to post this review, because I really wanted you to know my honest thoughts on it.
I do hope new updates are coming soon- I'm unclear if the story is over or not, with the way you ended the fourteenth chapter with that clever poem... it is open-ended enough to be recognized as an ending.(I sincerely hope it is not however, I wants me some more delicious fiction) I also hope you have not lost all will or desire to continue with this brilliant piece of work(Which can be the case when authors do not receive enough reviews or appreciation for their hard work spent in writing.)
But if that last bit is the case, it's understandable- extremely saddening, but understandable. So if it is, please drop a reply, or perhaps alter your profile to give some kind of commentary on it?
Lovin your talent for the written word~
DT
The characterization is spot on, the people come alive in your mind, I find myself reading almost entire chapters out loud, smiling like a poof at how cute William is and how Buffy is so helplessly drawn to it.
You capture the time period so well in your writing, the descriptions are elegant and a delight to devour. It's like I myself have been tossed back into time, being forced into the same kind of restrictions as Buffy while I verbally rail at my computer about the pointless social protocols. I can recall clearly at one point shouting: "Fuck it! Buffy, hang the rules and punch the bitch in the face- dear god please!"
As is bloody obvious, I'm in love with the damn story you've so artfully created. So much so that I took the time to create an account on adultff.net just to post this review, because I really wanted you to know my honest thoughts on it.
I do hope new updates are coming soon- I'm unclear if the story is over or not, with the way you ended the fourteenth chapter with that clever poem... it is open-ended enough to be recognized as an ending.(I sincerely hope it is not however, I wants me some more delicious fiction) I also hope you have not lost all will or desire to continue with this brilliant piece of work(Which can be the case when authors do not receive enough reviews or appreciation for their hard work spent in writing.)
But if that last bit is the case, it's understandable- extremely saddening, but understandable. So if it is, please drop a reply, or perhaps alter your profile to give some kind of commentary on it?
Lovin your talent for the written word~
DT
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh, ooh, more, more... uh... please?
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story please update sooon!
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a nice story! I hope you will continue it.
I mean this could be complete, but i like the storyline and how you write it. I hope you write more, and i hope you do it soon!!
I mean this could be complete, but i like the storyline and how you write it. I hope you write more, and i hope you do it soon!!
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February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I want a stuffed William doll to hug! With his little glasses and his little brown forelock falling into his eyes... How adorable would that be?
As to your story, Brava! There are not nearly enough charachter driven stories in this fandom. And the few you encounter tend to be not nearly strong enough in it's portrayal of personalities or dialogue.
Also, I thank you for frequent updates and long chapters. Since I have become addicted to this tale, to find a new chapter (or 2) every week or so is just plain exciting. It's like tuning in every Wednesday night to see what Bones and Booth have been up to! Addictive and lovely.
More William, more Buffy, more Anne... sil vous plait, just MORE! Make this story as long as you want, I will read every chapter :)
As to your story, Brava! There are not nearly enough charachter driven stories in this fandom. And the few you encounter tend to be not nearly strong enough in it's portrayal of personalities or dialogue.
Also, I thank you for frequent updates and long chapters. Since I have become addicted to this tale, to find a new chapter (or 2) every week or so is just plain exciting. It's like tuning in every Wednesday night to see what Bones and Booth have been up to! Addictive and lovely.
More William, more Buffy, more Anne... sil vous plait, just MORE! Make this story as long as you want, I will read every chapter :)
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, oh oh my! i just found this story today and couldn't stop reading until i'd reached the most recent chapter. it's so lovely!
and i hate that i have to wait to find out what happens...i'm afraid that william still runs into drusilla...
i await your next update with baited breath!
and i hate that i have to wait to find out what happens...i'm afraid that william still runs into drusilla...
i await your next update with baited breath!
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
To say I love your story is an understatment. I absolutely adore it, a rarity I assure you. Though I like much of the fanfiction I read, I'm rather picky about leaving reviews. Lol, I fear I'm becoming more fond of William stories then Spike ones, for some reason or another the William ones I've read seem to be written better & more character & plot driven. I do beg of you that you update as soon as possible, I'm not big with patience when it comes to stories, I hate being left wondering, not knowing whats going to happen next. So cliffhangers are killers for me, lol. I can't wait to read more of "Forward to Time Past"!! Please email me when you intend to update it.
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this. This is the first BVS fic I have ever read. And I love it. Amazing job.